Practice 12: Problem-Solution paragraphs "Bullying"

Brainstorming of the problems:

Brainstorming of the solutions:

First paragraph outline: 

Topic sentence: bullying is a serious problem that has always been in our education system,

but nowadays it can be more controlled but the problem is not resolved yet.

Supporting sentences:

having insecurities with yourself 

body shaming

having insecurities with the things you like

Conclude sentence: bullying is a difficult topic, we have made a lot of majorities with this aspect, but we need to investigate more about it. 

Bullying is a serious problem that has always been in our education system, but nowadays

it can be more controlled but the problem is not resolved yet. Being bullied makes you feel

that you are a weirdo, and at the same time makes you feel insecure with yourself. Some

aggressors make fun of the appearance of someone, and that makes that the victim has

insecurities about their body that maybe they did not have before. Furthermore, the aggressors

make fun of the things you like to do as well such as reading or something not as common for

children. Bullying is a difficult topic, we have made a lot of majorities with this aspect, but we

need to investigate more about it. 

Second paragraph outline: 

Topic sentence: One solution to the problem of bullying is communicate how you feel with your inner circle. 

Supporting sentences:

having communication

family 

teachers

Conclude sentence: Communication is the key to solving almost any problem. 

One solution to the problem of bullying is communicate how you feel with your inner circle.

First of all, if you are getting bullied by someone in your school, you have to let it be known

to your parents. They will always have care of you and will try to help you in everything you

need. But, some kids do not have enough confidence with their parents because of the way

they have been educated by them. For that reason, if you feel more comfortable talking to a

person who does not know you as well as your parents, but at the same time, they care about

you, you have to talk with your teacher. Your teacher would communicate with your parents and

both of them will try to fix the problem you are involved in. Communication is the key to solving

almost any problem.